Thank you
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Hi. Kayla
I was really happy that I looked your feedback message.
I feel that you are one of the best teacher I have met.
I haven't met a teacher who make a specific feedback like you.
I am really appreciate you.
So, today's breaking news topic is about china compnany's advertisement.
The laundry detergent company of china made a racist advertisement.
A chinese woman put detergent into the mouth of a black man.
And she push him into washing machin, so he change to chinese man with wite white skin.
So in the internet, there are a lot of a critic written.
These days, even if the racism is very sensitive problem over the world,
I am concerned about such behavior.
Finally, I make effort to correct "ph"sound.
Thank you.
Have a nice day!
Jayden
I was really happy that I looked your feedback message.
I feel that you are one of the best teacher I have met.
I haven't met a teacher who make a specific feedback like you.
I am really appreciate you.
So, today's breaking news topic is about china compnany's advertisement.
The laundry detergent company of china made a racist advertisement.
A chinese woman put detergent into the mouth of a black man.
And she push him into washing machin, so he change to chinese man with wite white skin.
So in the internet, there are a lot of a critic written.
These days, even if the racism is very sensitive problem over the world,
I am concerned about such behavior.
Finally, I make effort to correct "ph"sound.
Thank you.
Have a nice day!
Jayden
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