help, please
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
After I’ve got married, our family have rent a house for a long time. Five years ago, we finally bought our house.
At that time, we didn’t make much money.
So we had to buy old house and lots of things were done to repair or change.
Before we moved the house, the house was repaired.
First, we changed every outlet, lights, showerheads into new ones and the bathtub was taken away
Second, we put up wallpapers all rooms.
Third, at second floor, we constructed to separate living room from one room.
All of things were done by hired workers.
We spent a lot of money but the house is a place to live in.
At that time, we didn’t make much money.
So we had to buy old house and lots of things were done to repair or change.
Before we moved the house, the house was repaired.
First, we changed every outlet, lights, showerheads into new ones and the bathtub was taken away
Second, we put up wallpapers all rooms.
Third, at second floor, we constructed to separate living room from one room.
All of things were done by hired workers.
We spent a lot of money but the house is a place to live in.
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