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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 06. 02 조회 13083

I want to tell you something funny story.

작성자: 1100909357 담당 튜터: Wilma
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I used to visit India for my buisness trip. Actually, it is customary for Indians to answer "No problem" when someask somethig. It doesn't matter what the questions are. For example, when i went to the local cousine, i found out that there was a cheap and deliciaous looking lobster dish. But it seemed like that nobody try to that item. So I just asked them to order. They said "No problem"..
And i waited for the dish for about 1 hour. But they didn't serve the food. Finally i realized that the cheif went to the riverside to grab some lobsters when i was looking at the kitchen.
here is antother thing. When i was taking the bus, i felt some unforgettable hand on my hip. Actually at that time, i had relatively long hair. So i thought that this guy misunderstoot that i was a girl. So i talked to him in a low voice. "hey i am guy." and It seemed that he was so embrassed for a while and he said a few seconds later...
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"no problem"
튜터 교정 답변

I used to visit India for my buisness trip. Actually, it is customary for Indians to answer "No problem" when someone ask about something . It doesn't matter what the questions are. For example, when i went to the local cousine, i found out that there was a cheap and deliciaous looking lobster dish. But it seemed like that nobody try to that item. So I just asked them to order. They said "No problem"..
And i waited for the dish for about 1 hour. But they didn't serve the food. Finally i realized that the chef went to the riverside to grab some lobsters when i was looking at the kitchen.
here is another thing. When i was taking the bus, i felt some unforgettable hand on my hip. Actually at that time, i had relatively long hair. So i thought that this guy misunderstood that i was a girl. So i talked to him in a low voice. "hey i am guy." and It seemed that he was so embrassed for a while and he said a few seconds later...
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"no problem"

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