Camping trip

There are a family of four and dogs. Today is their son's birthday.

They are in the campsite. Their father, mother and daughter are in the tent and their son and dog are in front of tent.

They celebrate their son's birthday.

*********

Hello!

I don't really understand much about what you have written but I think you really had fun because of the camp. 

Anyway, hope you could have a lot more camps wirh your family

****************.

Here are some corrections ;

The family which is consist of 4 members and one dog .They went on a camp because it was their sons birthday.

They are in the campsite. The father, mother ,daughter ,son and their dog are in front of the tent.