Simple sentences
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
#1 - wedding ceremony
I cannot go to the wedding ceremony because I had plans with my friends. So I will ask my friend to pass the money to the groom as a wedding gift on behalf of me.
#2 - sprain
I sprained my back a few months ago. Although my back was nearly recovered, I'm still reluctant to play basketball.
#3 - visit to China
I'm planning to go to China this summer with my girlfriend. We have been together for more than 3 and a half years, but it will be my first visit to China. I'm looking forward to seeing her family and her hometown.
#4 - tragic accident
There was a tragic accident happened in Korea a few days ago.
A person was attempting to commit suicide and jumped from the 21st floor of a building, but unfortunately he fell on a passerby and they were both dead at the same time.
I cannot go to the wedding ceremony because I had plans with my friends. So I will ask my friend to pass the money to the groom as a wedding gift on behalf of me.
#2 - sprain
I sprained my back a few months ago. Although my back was nearly recovered, I'm still reluctant to play basketball.
#3 - visit to China
I'm planning to go to China this summer with my girlfriend. We have been together for more than 3 and a half years, but it will be my first visit to China. I'm looking forward to seeing her family and her hometown.
#4 - tragic accident
There was a tragic accident happened in Korea a few days ago.
A person was attempting to commit suicide and jumped from the 21st floor of a building, but unfortunately he fell on a passerby and they were both dead at the same time.
튜터 교정 답변
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