My New Year’s Resolution
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I want to travel to Italy this year.
I have never been to European countries before, so I think it
Will be the once-in-a lifetime experience.
When I go there, I will vist Venice, the city of water.
I will take a gondola ride, eat seafood, and take lots of pictures.
There are also many other things that I want to do.
To go to Italy, I must save money to prepare traveling expenses And buy the ticket.
I am looking forward to going there very much.
I have never been to European countries before, so I think it
Will be the once-in-a lifetime experience.
When I go there, I will vist Venice, the city of water.
I will take a gondola ride, eat seafood, and take lots of pictures.
There are also many other things that I want to do.
To go to Italy, I must save money to prepare traveling expenses And buy the ticket.
I am looking forward to going there very much.
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