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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 06. 07 조회 13879

My best friend

작성자: 1102013615 담당 튜터: Christie
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My best friend is Woosang. He is 52 yeares old.
We became friends because we were in the same class in middle School.
We have been friends for more than thirty years and we are still Best friends.
When I meet him, I fell very comfortable.
Also, I like his appearance.
He looks very modern and chic.
He is always warm and kind, too.
He is such a nice person.
튜터 교정 답변

My best friend is Woosang. He is 52 years old.
We became friends because we were in the same class in middle school.
We have been friends for more than thirty years and we are still best friends.
When I meet him, I fell very comfortable.
Also, I like his appearance.
He looks very modern and chic.
He is always warm and kind, too.
He is such a nice person.

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