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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 05. 13 조회 13259

Cooking

작성자: 119906 담당 튜터: Ida
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Well, in general, whenever I'd like to treat my peers, I usually invite them via the email and arrange the precise schedule for it. As a matter of fact, I guess that's the most convenient way to invite guests. However, I tend to hind the information about the dish I'd serve because I just want to surprise them. My most favorite dish for those friends is BBQ, since that's what I am really good at. As far as I'm concerned, all the guests I've treated talked about it as great. I know it might sometimes be a kind of flattery but I'm really proud of the fact that they usually seem to be satisfied with my cooking, though.
튜터 교정 답변

Well, in general, whenever I'd like to treat my peers, I usually invite them via the email and arrange the precise schedule for it. As a matter of fact, I guess that's the most convenient way to invite guests. However, I tend to hind hide the information about the dish I'd serve because I just want to surprise them. My most favorite dish for those friends is BBQ, since that's what I am really good at. As far as I'm concerned, all the guests I've treated talked about it as great. I know it might sometimes be a kind of flattery but I'm really proud of the fact that they usually seem to be satisfied with my cooking, though.

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I didn't know that you like to cook Sean. I'm a frustrated cook. I wish my friends will tell me the same thing when I cook for them. Well, I hope that you continue doing what you want. Keep it up!

- Teacher Ida^^

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