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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 06. 08 조회 13110

help, please

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수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
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The youth who are looking for the job in Korea are trying to build up a specification like a certificaton and studying foreign language.
As soon as they enter the university, they give time, effort and money unsparingly to get much more spec than others.
But the company doesn’t want the applicants have many specs.
Interviewers say that the applicants have specialized knowledge and technology that company wants and they have a chance to pass the interview.
There are big gap between the recruiters and the applicants in job marketing.
튜터 교정 답변

Great job, Rose!

The youth who are looking for jobs in Korea are trying to build up a specification like a certificaton and studying foreign languages.
As soon as they enter university, they give time, effort, and money unsparingly to get more specs than others.
But the company doesn’t want the applicants have many specs.
Interviewers want applicants to have specialized knowledge of technologies. Then they have a better chance of getting hired.
There is a big gap between the recruiters and the applicants in the job market.

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