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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 06. 09 조회 13761

help, please

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Frankly, I don’t know about successful interviews in other countries so I’ll tell you to be general.
I think if the applicant succeed in interview easily, he or she should be internship experience with job-relavant field although he or she has lots of specs.
If he or she doesn’t have a job-relating specs, it might not be easy for him or her to get a job.
In Korea, university students are not interested in what they study but they want to get jobs regardless of their major so they are building up many kinds of specs now.
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Great job, Rose!

Frankly, I don’t know about successful interviews in other countries, so I’ll speak generally.
I think if the applicant succeeds in an interview easily, he or she should could get internship experience in a relavant field, even if he or she has lots of specs.
If he or she doesn’t have a job-relating specs, it might not be easy for him or her to get a job.
In Korea, university students are not interested in what they study. They want to get jobs regardless of their major, so they are building up many kinds of specs now.

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