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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 06. 10 조회 14598

I am lonely.

작성자: 1100909357 담당 튜터: Wilma
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I feel like i have been living alone since approximatrly 2 months ago. i don't know exact reasons why i feel lonely but one thing i can tell you is that i am lonely. Probably because i am tied up with bunch of tasks which i have to achive for me and my company. To be honest, i tried to join the club with someone who have a lot with me in common. for example dancing, playing guitars, rock climbing and so much more. But i don't have much time to enjoy that activities.
For starters, i just only focus on getting advanced level in opic test. After that, the next step that i want to is find a gorgeors girl that i may take a fancy at first sight like movies. Here the fact comes that why i can not meet someone...I'm too dreamy person.
Ok i should have face the realism of my life.
Always thank you teacher!
튜터 교정 답변

I feel like i have been living alone since approximately 2 months ago. i don't know the exact reason why i feel lonely but one thing i can tell you is that i am lonely. Probably because i am tied up with bunch of tasks which i have to achive for me and my company. To be honest, i tried to join the club with someone who has a lot with me in common. for example dancing, playing guitars, rock climbing and so much more. But i don't have much time to enjoy those activities.
For starters, i just only focus on getting advanced level in opic test. After that, the next step that i want to is find a gorgeors girl that i may take a fancy at first sight like movies. Here the fact comes that why i can not meet someone...I'm too dreamy person.
Ok i should have face the realism of my life.
Always thank you teacher!

 

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P.S.

It is not wrong to be a dreamy person. All of us are dreamer even those people who are rich and famous. In my opinion, you have to take it easy. One step at a time. You feel lonely because you are single that's why you feel lonely and alone. You need a companion or a partner in life who can listen to your ups and downs. While waiting for the test why don't you go out and meet new people or try a blind date. Soemtimes, it's not about the looks but the personality of a woman that will make her gorgeous. Smile ^_^

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