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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 06. 11 조회 12355

Receiving Package

작성자: 1102300169 담당 튜터: Stacey
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I ordered my shirts and pants online shopping mall yesterday.

I just arrive at home,the doorbell rings. I opens the door and
find a deliveryman standing with a package in his hands.

He hands the box over to me and asks me to sign a form

I receive the package and sign. I unpack the box and get checked my shirts and pants.

My pants is too small, I'll get an exchange larger one tomorrow.
튜터 교정 답변

I ordered my shirts and pants  through online shopping yesterday.

I just arrived home, the doorbell rang. I opened the door and
the deliveryman was standing with a package on his hands.

He handed the box to me and asked me to sign a form.

I received the package and signed. I unpacked the box and checked my shirts and pants.

My pants was too small, I'll get an exchange with a larger size tomorrow.

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