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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 06. 13 조회 12684

Reading Newspapaer

작성자: 1101159936 담당 튜터: Pamela2
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I have been into reading newspaper since I started reading newspaper when I was about ten years old.
Back then, we subscribed to two newspaper companies, called Dong-a-ilbo and Chosun-ilbo. They were written in Korean language, Hangul and Chinese language, Hanja. So I could keep up with the latest nes and study Chinese at the same time. I especially liked sports news. It was my routine to check the scoreboard and comments on the games when I woke up.
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I have been into reading newspapers since I started reading when I was about ten years old.
Back then, we subscribed to two newspaper companies, called Dong-a-ilbo and Chosun-ilbo. They were written in Korean language, Hangul and Chinese language, Hanja. So I could keep up with the latest news and study Chinese at the same time. I especially liked sports news. It was my routine to check the scoreboard and sports reporters comments on the games when I woke up.

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