My daughter's sick
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Last weekend, My family planed to go to the resort one night two days.
There are a swimming pool, a shopping mall and a historical spots near the resort.
In the morning, I prepared for some clothes, swimsuits.
My daughter told me, "I was sick". I ignored her word for the first time.
But, she said, "I had a stomachache" several times.
I drove doctor's office. Doctor examined my daughter. He said she had a enteritis.
I gave up going to resort. I didn't confirm my daughter's sick.
I was so sorry my daughter.
She has stayed slack.
There are a swimming pool, a shopping mall and a historical spots near the resort.
In the morning, I prepared for some clothes, swimsuits.
My daughter told me, "I was sick". I ignored her word for the first time.
But, she said, "I had a stomachache" several times.
I drove doctor's office. Doctor examined my daughter. He said she had a enteritis.
I gave up going to resort. I didn't confirm my daughter's sick.
I was so sorry my daughter.
She has stayed slack.
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