help, please
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I’ve mentioned before, I am not good at machine, so I’ve always envied the man who take a picture very well.
In thirties years old, I bought a camera because I had a kid and would like to take pictures of my cute kid.
II took numerous pictures him at home and outside.
Recently, I took pictures with smart phone and it’has high-resolution camera.
Sometimes I looked pictures with my sons when they were young and told them the situation and background.
We really missed those days.
In thirties years old, I bought a camera because I had a kid and would like to take pictures of my cute kid.
II took numerous pictures him at home and outside.
Recently, I took pictures with smart phone and it’has high-resolution camera.
Sometimes I looked pictures with my sons when they were young and told them the situation and background.
We really missed those days.
튜터 교정 답변
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