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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 06. 16 조회 12792

help, please

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I enjoy taking pictures of scenery with people.
No matter how nice scenery is, I don’t like to take pictures by myself.
If I go to good views, I always capture the look with my kids or accompanied colleagues
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Excellent job, Rose! :)

I enjoy taking pictures of scenery with people.
No matter how nice the scenery is, I don’t like to take pictures by myself.
If I go to a place with a good view, I always take a picture with my kids or colleagues.

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