help, please
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I don’t remember the impressive photographs which I took pictures.
When I was young, my eldest sister had to leave our country, so we wanted to make good memories and our family took pictures in Photo Studio.
A several months later, my elder brother went to Photo Studio to take pictures back.
But the Photo Studio already moved another place. We inquired here and there where the Photo Studio moved.
Owner of the shop next door said that before the Studio had moved another place, they were worried about not taking pictures back but he said he didn’t know about photos.
I was very regretable if my elder brother had gone the Studio a little earlier.
When I was young, my eldest sister had to leave our country, so we wanted to make good memories and our family took pictures in Photo Studio.
A several months later, my elder brother went to Photo Studio to take pictures back.
But the Photo Studio already moved another place. We inquired here and there where the Photo Studio moved.
Owner of the shop next door said that before the Studio had moved another place, they were worried about not taking pictures back but he said he didn’t know about photos.
I was very regretable if my elder brother had gone the Studio a little earlier.
튜터 교정 답변
교정 내용이 클립보드에 복사되었습니다!