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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 06. 17 조회 12630

Forest Therapy

작성자: 1100353845 담당 튜터: Aaron2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
http://forest-therapy.net/home.html
Hi aaron.
This web site explains about forest therapy. There are many blogs about success story healing skin deases in Korea. but can not find one in English.
Go to forest and stay couple of days.
튜터 교정 답변

http://forest-therapy.net/home.html
Hi aaron.
This web site explains about forest therapy. There are many blogs about success story healing skin deases in Korea. but can not find one in English.
Go to forest and stay couple of days.

교정 내용이 클립보드에 복사되었습니다!