Qingdao and Beer
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During my summer vacation, I am going to Quingdao, China with my girlfriend.
I have known that the city, her hometown, is very famous for beer and holds a beer festival annually.
I heard that city was dominated by Germany in late 19th and early 20th century and many breweries was made at that time.
That's why the city became famous for beer.
Although the reson is not pleasant, I would like to exprience history and present of the city by visiting the breweries and participating in the beer festival in person.
I have known that the city, her hometown, is very famous for beer and holds a beer festival annually.
I heard that city was dominated by Germany in late 19th and early 20th century and many breweries was made at that time.
That's why the city became famous for beer.
Although the reson is not pleasant, I would like to exprience history and present of the city by visiting the breweries and participating in the beer festival in person.
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