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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 06. 20 조회 13395

Watching sports

작성자: 1102013615 담당 튜터: Christie
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I enjoy watch baseball The team I like the most is the samsung lions
It's my favorite because it often wins and has a great record.
My favorite player is Seung Yub, Lee because he is excellent batter.
He helped his team win the most recent championship He was also the series MVP.
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I enjoy watching baseball.  The team I like the most is the Samsung Lions.
It's my favorite because it often wins and has a great record.
My favorite player is Seung Yub, Lee because he is an excellent batter.
He helped his team win the most recent championship.   He was also the series MVP.

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