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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 06. 20 조회 12909

My friend

작성자: 1102300169 담당 튜터: Stacey
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Last sunday, I met my friend in the my co-worker's wedding.
We didn't meet each other for a long time. He went to the study abroad 10 years ago.

He came back to the country this year. We contacted telephone because we live a long distance.

When I went to the wedding site, I was so surprising he was there with his wife and baby.

After co-worker's wedding finished, I had to part with my friend's family. We promised meet next month.
튜터 교정 답변

Last Sunday, I saw my friend at my co-worker's wedding ceremony.
We haven't seen each other for a long time. He went abroad to study,10 years ago.

He came back to the country this year. We talked on the telephone because he's living far from my city.

When I went to the wedding reception, I was so surprised, he was there with his wife and baby.

After the wedding, I had to say goodbye to my friend's family. We promised that we will meet/see again next month.

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