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I think that the most influenced foreign country to our culture is China.
Korea has connected China for a long time, approximately over 1,000 years.
If you read the newspaper, you can easily see the Chinese character and understand the meaning with it.
Most of our first name are borrowed from China.
But nowadays, Korean culture is influencing other countries because of Korean Wave.
It started with drama, K-pop, fashion and continues Korean food.
I was surprised at the news that K-pop was so popular in Asia like Japan, China, Hongkong and Vietnam.
The young people in those country were crazy about idol group’s performance.
Through these international exchanges, our culture is known abroad.
Parents have their kids teach foreign language without reference to kids’tendency.
Korea has connected China for a long time, approximately over 1,000 years.
If you read the newspaper, you can easily see the Chinese character and understand the meaning with it.
Most of our first name are borrowed from China.
But nowadays, Korean culture is influencing other countries because of Korean Wave.
It started with drama, K-pop, fashion and continues Korean food.
I was surprised at the news that K-pop was so popular in Asia like Japan, China, Hongkong and Vietnam.
The young people in those country were crazy about idol group’s performance.
Through these international exchanges, our culture is known abroad.
Parents have their kids teach foreign language without reference to kids’tendency.
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