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help, please

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Hi, I am youngsook Choi. I just arrived arport to get on an airplane A95 bound for Seoul at 7:15 pm.
But I am embarresed that departure time in your plane has been postponed for two hours.
I have planned task in Seoul, so I should not be late.
Why doesn’t the plane depart?
Is there anything problem, bad weather or out-of-order?
When will the flight take off?
When the flight is ready, would you inform me it directly?
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Great job, Rose :)

Hi, I am youngsook Choi. I just arrived at the arport to get on an airplane A95 bound for Seoul at 7:15 pm.
But the departure time has been postponed for two hours.
I have an appointment in Seoul, so I can't be late.
Why doesn’t the plane depart?
Is there anything problem, bad weather or out-of-order?
When will the flight take off?
When the flight is ready, would you inform me it directly?

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