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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 06. 27 조회 13316

Doing Chores

작성자: 1102013615 담당 튜터: Christie
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I do my chores everyday when I am at home, I usually have to hang up the clothes

and take out the garbage

My wife is responsible for preparing dinner.

I use a vacuum cleaner and clean the floor.

After finishing my chores I felt good.

I problem was that my daughter's is not play crying.
튜터 교정 답변

I do my chores everyday when I am at home, I usually have to hang up the clothes

and take out the garbage.

My wife is responsible for preparing dinner.

I use a vacuum cleaner and clean the floor.

After finishing my chores I feel good.

My problem is that my daughter is not playing but crying.

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