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Hi, Leejun. It’s youngsook. I’m supposed to meet you at 5 p.m at the Seoul Station.
Sorry I missed the train by my fault.
You’re also on the waty station, right?
I’ll catch the next train at 5. 20 pm and you may wait a little longer than we thought.
What are you doing while you are waiting?
You’ll have a cup of coffee with internet surfing or you could browse in a book in the store near the station.
I'll treat you dinner to show my apology.
I’m so sorry about it once again.
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Great job, Rose!

Hi, Leejun. It’s Youngsook. I’m supposed to meet you at 5 p.m at the Seoul Station.
Sorry I missed the train. It was my fault.
You're also on the way to the station, right?
I’ll catch the next train at 5:20 pm, and you may have to wait a little longer than we thought.
What will you do while you are waiting?
You might have a cup of coffee while surfing the internet, or you could browse through a book in a store near the station.
I'll treat you to dinner to apologize.
Once again, I’m very sorry.

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