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Many countries in the world are suffering from food shortage.
Some developed countreis, obesity is social critical problems.
But underdeveloped countries in Africa and Asia, famine and malnutrition are also big issues.
These countries are not adjusted to cultivate crops because there are water shortage and hot weather but birth rates are increasing.
I think that if this trend is continued, food for mankind is short in the near future.
Some of global companies are developing GMO(genetically modified organizm)
GMO and crossbreed crops are different. GMO is good and bad points.
Someday, the scientiests will make simple food easily like capsule
Some developed countreis, obesity is social critical problems.
But underdeveloped countries in Africa and Asia, famine and malnutrition are also big issues.
These countries are not adjusted to cultivate crops because there are water shortage and hot weather but birth rates are increasing.
I think that if this trend is continued, food for mankind is short in the near future.
Some of global companies are developing GMO(genetically modified organizm)
GMO and crossbreed crops are different. GMO is good and bad points.
Someday, the scientiests will make simple food easily like capsule
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