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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 06. 29 조회 12638

Crrent boss VS Previous boss

작성자: 1510244 담당 튜터: Rosey
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
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my current boss is really different form my previous boss.
i felt comfortable from my previous boss.
because he was outgoing person.
So, when we have free time, we quite often enjoyed to some sport together.
for example, we rode a snowboard in winter and enjoyed to hiking togather in spring.
Come to think of it, my previous boss and me had a very similar hobby. very interesting.
so I have some good expiearane with my previous boss.
On the other hands, my current boss is not good for me.
because he really love our company work, so sometimes I also have to work till midnight with him.
however, he make sure provide to rest on weekends. i love this point.
that's all
튜터 교정 답변

My current boss is really different form my previous boss.
I felt comfortable from my previous boss because he was an outgoing person.
So, when we have free time, we quite often enjoyed to engage in some sports together.
For example, we rode a snowboard in winter and enjoyed hiking together in spring.
Come to think of it, my previous boss and me had a very similar hobby. It is very interesting so I have some good experiences with my previous boss.
On the other hand, my current boss is not good for me because he really loves our company work, so sometimes I also have to work 'til midnight with him.
However, he makes sure to  let us rest on weekends. I love this point.
That's all!

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