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Great job, Rose!

In Korea, our country had been under the monarchy for a long time.
After our country was independent from the Japanese, there was a state of confusion.
At that time, a coup happened, junta took power and controlled the press.
If the power is focused on one person, and the period is long, the regime is accompanied by corruption.
In my second year of university, many people, especially university students, and me demonstrated to destroy the military regime.
At last, Korea turned into a real democratic country.