help, please
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
It’s hard to answer this question.
My kids are absorbed in listening music and they know about music a lot.
But I’m not big interested in hearing music.
Sometimes I listen to ballad music and I am consoled.
When I was a student, I learned playing the piano just a little.
Learning how to play instruments is not my interests.
But I want my kids to play the instruments and my youngest son is learning to play the violine.
My kids are absorbed in listening music and they know about music a lot.
But I’m not big interested in hearing music.
Sometimes I listen to ballad music and I am consoled.
When I was a student, I learned playing the piano just a little.
Learning how to play instruments is not my interests.
But I want my kids to play the instruments and my youngest son is learning to play the violine.
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