Please check my sentences gramatically (7.1)
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
The rain spell has already started.
I have to bring my unbrella wherever I go.
In the day that I don't exercise, my condition is not good.
Exercise makes me feel great.
I don't hope to be raining tomorrow, because I will go wakeboarding.
I will pray for god before I go to sleep, "Don't make rain."
I hope to avoid rain during weekend.
I don't care whether it's raining or not because I will just stay at the office.
I have to sorry for him because his wife has an abortion.
Fortunately his wife is good, so they can open wedding march.
I think their mentality is not good.
If I have my selfie stick, I don't need to ask someone to take our pictures.
I take a lot of pictures during summer vacation.
I put the best shot in the frame.
And then, I put the frame on my desk.
Although my work is stressful, but I'm ok when I see my family picture in the frame on my desk.
Wedding march is only one day for thier lives.
Brand new smartphone is enough to take good pictures.
I have to bring my unbrella wherever I go.
In the day that I don't exercise, my condition is not good.
Exercise makes me feel great.
I don't hope to be raining tomorrow, because I will go wakeboarding.
I will pray for god before I go to sleep, "Don't make rain."
I hope to avoid rain during weekend.
I don't care whether it's raining or not because I will just stay at the office.
I have to sorry for him because his wife has an abortion.
Fortunately his wife is good, so they can open wedding march.
I think their mentality is not good.
If I have my selfie stick, I don't need to ask someone to take our pictures.
I take a lot of pictures during summer vacation.
I put the best shot in the frame.
And then, I put the frame on my desk.
Although my work is stressful, but I'm ok when I see my family picture in the frame on my desk.
Wedding march is only one day for thier lives.
Brand new smartphone is enough to take good pictures.
튜터 교정 답변
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