Listening to Music
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Well, I'd have to say that I'm quite into listening to music. What I wanna discuss here is one of the famous rock bands from this country, named YB. To be more specific, I'm really fond of their rock numbers that make me feel alive. As for a solo singer that I adore, you need to know that IU is my favorite at this moment. I guess the reason has something to do with the fact that she is not only a talented singer but also quite stunning guitar player. And, moreover, the fact that my daughter is a big fan of her might be another factor which I like her and her songs, which are mostly light but socially meaningful.
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