Please check my sentences gramatically (7.5)
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I felt relieved that I could their face with happiness in the wedding march.
When I prepared to get a job, I used to take a class from language institutes to obtain certifications like OPIc, TOEIC.
I didn't care whether I went to academy alone or with friends.
I'm a kind of outgoing person.
I can get on like a house on a fire with everyone.
If I want to concentrate on study, I study alone.
If there are someone who study with me, I can't focus on my study.
I'd have a chat with them.
It is helpful to gather when I want to discuss specific subject.
I think both cases would be good.
I'm similar to you. I write the material on paper by hand.
I love to draw mind map. Mind map motivate my brain remember material contents.
I've noticed that you asked me about wedding march.
My best friend smiled like a idiot during his wedding.
I teased him a little bit, but he looked like he was on the top of the world.
Guests have to pay money to couple as celebrate meaning.
When I prepared to get a job, I used to take a class from language institutes to obtain certifications like OPIc, TOEIC.
I didn't care whether I went to academy alone or with friends.
I'm a kind of outgoing person.
I can get on like a house on a fire with everyone.
If I want to concentrate on study, I study alone.
If there are someone who study with me, I can't focus on my study.
I'd have a chat with them.
It is helpful to gather when I want to discuss specific subject.
I think both cases would be good.
I'm similar to you. I write the material on paper by hand.
I love to draw mind map. Mind map motivate my brain remember material contents.
I've noticed that you asked me about wedding march.
My best friend smiled like a idiot during his wedding.
I teased him a little bit, but he looked like he was on the top of the world.
Guests have to pay money to couple as celebrate meaning.
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