help, please
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Korea is not found gas and oil.
We import these things from other oil-producing countries and these prices in Korea always connect with international oil prices.
If he gas prices are down, the economy is active, but otherwise people tighten their daily lives (for exemple, they use public transportation than their cars and cut down electric appliance’s usuage) and government does, too.
Our country’s economic crisis is due to real estate.
The government’s low interest policy is continued and many people (even though young couple) are investing like house, apartment and land but they have little their own capital.
Because they pay their debt, they don’t have extra money to enjoy heir lives so the domestic economy is stagnant.
We import these things from other oil-producing countries and these prices in Korea always connect with international oil prices.
If he gas prices are down, the economy is active, but otherwise people tighten their daily lives (for exemple, they use public transportation than their cars and cut down electric appliance’s usuage) and government does, too.
Our country’s economic crisis is due to real estate.
The government’s low interest policy is continued and many people (even though young couple) are investing like house, apartment and land but they have little their own capital.
Because they pay their debt, they don’t have extra money to enjoy heir lives so the domestic economy is stagnant.
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