Please check my sentences gramatically (7.6)
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
There was a special episode that I have interesting about studying english.
When I got into college, I wanted to improve my english skill.
My study group was composed of 5 members, 1 trainer and 4 trainees.
I was one of the trainees.
My trainer paid attention to me.
She trained me to speak english intensively.
Up until that point my english skill was not good.
It was difficult to keep up with other trainees.
I felt behind from others.
I wanted to crawl under a rock.
Her strict training went on for 3months.
My english skill was better than now.
If I want to speak foreign language more fluently, I have to memory a lot of idioms.
Better expression stems from a tons of idioms.
I had to be depend on the subtitle in Korean.
While I watched US movie,I wanted to understand without subtitle.
In the case that I can't understand meaning, I'm depend on subtitle in English.
I have to follow up our CEO.
It is not easy, but it would be helpful when I become CEO.
When I got into college, I wanted to improve my english skill.
My study group was composed of 5 members, 1 trainer and 4 trainees.
I was one of the trainees.
My trainer paid attention to me.
She trained me to speak english intensively.
Up until that point my english skill was not good.
It was difficult to keep up with other trainees.
I felt behind from others.
I wanted to crawl under a rock.
Her strict training went on for 3months.
My english skill was better than now.
If I want to speak foreign language more fluently, I have to memory a lot of idioms.
Better expression stems from a tons of idioms.
I had to be depend on the subtitle in Korean.
While I watched US movie,I wanted to understand without subtitle.
In the case that I can't understand meaning, I'm depend on subtitle in English.
I have to follow up our CEO.
It is not easy, but it would be helpful when I become CEO.
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