About 'Blackbeard Pirate'
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
(Correct my writing, please)
Hi, Rebeca. This is Leo.
Today morning, we talked about Scuba diving.
And you talked 'Blackbeard Pirate'.
So, I search about that in internet.
'Blackbeard Pirate' is one of most scared pirate and he is Englishman.
Internet said,
The story of Blackbeard Pirate inspired the popular Disney series 'The pirates of the Carribbean'.
I like Baseball and my one of favorite MLB team is 'Pittsburgh Pirates' .
But, first time you said 'Blackbeard Pirate' I can't understand that means.
After class I laughed myself.
English is so difficult.^^..
Maybe,
during the class my sentence have a lot of fault.
So as many as possible correct for me, please.
Thank you for your help.
See you tomorrow.
Hi, Rebeca. This is Leo.
Today morning, we talked about Scuba diving.
And you talked 'Blackbeard Pirate'.
So, I search about that in internet.
'Blackbeard Pirate' is one of most scared pirate and he is Englishman.
Internet said,
The story of Blackbeard Pirate inspired the popular Disney series 'The pirates of the Carribbean'.
I like Baseball and my one of favorite MLB team is 'Pittsburgh Pirates' .
But, first time you said 'Blackbeard Pirate' I can't understand that means.
After class I laughed myself.
English is so difficult.^^..
Maybe,
during the class my sentence have a lot of fault.
So as many as possible correct for me, please.
Thank you for your help.
See you tomorrow.
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