help, please
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Some civil servants whom I know are acting as artists like painters and musicians.
At first, they are interested in learning as hobbies but as time passes by, they participate in art contest and get the prize.
Although they are not so popular, I envy them.
Nowadays, I feel heavy with my job.
Of course, I love my work and work hard but I am tired of everydat trivials.
I don't know what my dream is.
Until now, I think I do my best in my current situation.
At first, they are interested in learning as hobbies but as time passes by, they participate in art contest and get the prize.
Although they are not so popular, I envy them.
Nowadays, I feel heavy with my job.
Of course, I love my work and work hard but I am tired of everydat trivials.
I don't know what my dream is.
Until now, I think I do my best in my current situation.
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