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Please check my sentences gramatically (7.8)

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I have to make a reservation on our place.

There are some cases that I feel desperated even on Friday.
Like this, my boss calls me and he orders direction to me at 5pm.
It means I have to finish it and can't go out, although 5 pm is my quitting time.
Except for this case, I feel happy on Friday.

My girlfriend prepares exams for entering graduate school

My flight was planned to depart at 7 am to New York.
I should have got the plane on time.
I heard the news that flight was delayed.
The weather is enough good for plane to depart.

Although I wanted to go back home as soon as possible, departure time was delayed because of rain.
I arrived in seoul 1 hour later than scheduled time.
Flight attendant gave us beverage and gifts to apologize for their meaning.

Nobody has weapon so we can go around even at night.
Many bars and pubs open all night long.
Korea is a good coutry to enjoy night life.
Before I was getting older, I used to enjoy night life.
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I have to make a reservation on our place.

There are some cases that I feel desperate, this happens even on Friday's.
My boss will call and give me work at 5pm.
Even though 5pm is when I leave, I cannot go.
He did not call this Friday and that made me very happy.

My girlfriend is prepareing for exams to enter graduate school.

My flight was scheduled to depart at 7 am to New York.
I should make my schedule flight ontime.
I heard on the news that flight was delayed.
The weather is enough good for the plane to depart.

 I wanted to go back home because the departure time was delayed because of rain.
I arrived in Seoul 1 hour later than scheduled time.
The flight attendant gave us beverages and gifts to apologize for their delay.

Nobody carries weapons so its safe for us to go out at night.
Many bars and pubs are open all night long.
Korea is a good country to enjoy the night life.
Before I got older, I used to enjoy night life.

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