help, please
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Frankly, I don’t think about LGBT(Lesibian, Gay, Bisexual and Transgender) deeply.
In the past, I thought that LGBT is western countries’ problems.
The news sometimes broadcasts some gay and lesibian situations of other countries.
Gay and Lesibian are also hot issue in Korea now.
A few days ago, gay group protested to keep their rights downtown in Taegu.
But the conservative group demonstrated to disapprove gay at aother places.
Gay couples are living shade places not sunny sites.
In the past, I thought that LGBT is western countries’ problems.
The news sometimes broadcasts some gay and lesibian situations of other countries.
Gay and Lesibian are also hot issue in Korea now.
A few days ago, gay group protested to keep their rights downtown in Taegu.
But the conservative group demonstrated to disapprove gay at aother places.
Gay couples are living shade places not sunny sites.
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