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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 07. 11 조회 13472

Remind

작성자: pkpm0807 담당 튜터: Beth1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Whenever I go to the restaurant, it reminds me of my ex-girlfriend.

In fact, I went to the restaurant with her many times and I have had many memories with her there.

That's why I go there sometimes.
튜터 교정 답변

Whenever I go to the restaurant, it reminds me of my ex-girlfriend.

In fact, I went to the restaurant with her many times and I have made many memories with her there.

That's why I go there sometimes.

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Great sentences. I only made one small correction. Using the word "had" is not bad but using the word "made" makes the sentence a little clearer. 

Teacher Beth

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