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Dear John,

How are you?
I am spending good time in Sri-Lanka, though actually it is so hot these days.

However, I have a little problem for the Air conditioner.
Several A/Cs have made some problems.
I already had checked and repaired A/Cs of house in the beginning of April with paying about 10,000 Rupee, but I called again Abans Service Center for repairing 2 A/Cs, and I paid about 7,000 Rupee last week.
I don’t know what will happen again from now.^^.

I would like to inform this situation.
튜터 교정 답변

Dear John, How are you? I am spending good time in Sri-Lanka, though actually it is so hot these days. However, I have a little problem for the Air conditioner. Several A/Cs have made some problems. I already had checked and repaired A/Cs of house in the beginning of April with paying about 10,000 Rupee, but I called again Abans Service Center for repairing 2 A/Cs, and I paid about 7,000 Rupee last week. I don’t know what will happen again from now.^^. I would like to inform this situation.

[Correction]

Dear John, How are you?

I am spending good time in Sri-Lanka, though actually it is so hot these days.

→I am spending a good time in Sri-Lanka, though actually it is so  the weather is so hot these days.

However, I have a little problem for the Air conditioner.

→However, I have a little problem for with the air conditioner.

Several A/Cs have made some problems.

→Several A/Cs have made some problems.

I already had checked and repaired A/Cs of house in the beginning of April with paying about 10,000 Rupee, but I called again Abans Service Center for repairing 2 A/Cs, and I paid about 7,000 Rupee last week.

→I already had checked and repaired A/Cs   all the airconditioners of   in the house in the beginning of   last April with paying about and paid 10,000 Rupee.

but I called again Abans Service Center for repairing 2 A/Cs, and I paid about 7,000 Rupee last week.

→But I called again Abans Service Center again for to repairing repair  two airconditioners and I paid about 7,000 Rupee last week.

I don’t know what will happen again from now.^^. I would like to inform this situation.

→I don’t know what will happen again from now.^^.

I would like to inform this situation.

→I would like to inform you about this situation.

[Comment]

Hi Hayden!

I'm sorry to hear that you are having problems with your airconditioners in the house.I suggest you to call the center again or you can also call another center that will help you fix the airconditioners.Have a nice day!^^

Teacher Kaie ^^

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