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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 07. 11 조회 14550

Please check my sentences gramatically (7.11)

작성자: 1102047346 담당 튜터: Melanie1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I volunteer for elementary school students as their english teacher.
I think the reason why they were active for my class was candy.
I gave candies to children who answered correctly for my question.

Yesterday was the first day that they started wakeboarding.
They falled down on water.
It was in a long time not to meet them.
I want to meet them as frequently as possible.
Wakeboarding is a good bridge to make us often meet.

I'm practicing tricks like jump, switch.

Agency will give us book Vol 1 again because there are a few unit that we didn't study.

My flight had a schedule to take off at 7am.
Runway was frozen because of heavy snow.
Staffs are trying to melt frozen road.
It will spend 2 hours.

How about changing the person who will participate meeting instead of me.

Can I postpone the meeting time on the day after my arrival?
I can get there until tomorrow.
Let me know the best alternative.

I don't like that the schedule would be changed suddenly.
튜터 교정 답변

I volunteer for elementary school students as their english teacher.
I think the students were active in my class because I gave out candy.
I gave candy to children who answered my questions correctly.

Yesterday was the first day that they started wakeboarding.
They fell down in the  water.
It took a long time to meet them.
I want to meet them as much as possible.
Wakeboarding is a good bridge to make us often meet.

I'm practicing tricks like jumping and switching.

Agency will give us volume 1 to study again because there were a few units that we didn't study.

My flight is schedule to take off at 7am.
The runway was frozen because of heavy snow.
The staffs istrying to melt the frozen road.
It will take 2 hours.

How about getting another person to attend the meeting.

Can I postpone the meeting time to the day after my arrival?
I cannot get there until tomorrow.
Let me know what is the best alternative.

I don't like that the schedule has suddenly changed.

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