Cooking
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Father-in-law came yesterday.
I have made doenjang soup in the morning.
Doenjang soup is my favorite food.
Father-in-law also liked it.
Also, it's delicious and good for my health.
I often cook it for my family on weekends and my family loves it.
I'll tell you how to make it.
To make kimchi fried rice, you don't need many ingredients.
Just prepare kimchi, onions, and carrots.
If you're a meat lover, you can add some meat.
First, fry the meat and vegetables with some oil.
Second, mix the chopped kimchi and vegetables with rice.
Lastly, add some soybean sauce and sesame oil.
I have made doenjang soup in the morning.
Doenjang soup is my favorite food.
Father-in-law also liked it.
Also, it's delicious and good for my health.
I often cook it for my family on weekends and my family loves it.
I'll tell you how to make it.
To make kimchi fried rice, you don't need many ingredients.
Just prepare kimchi, onions, and carrots.
If you're a meat lover, you can add some meat.
First, fry the meat and vegetables with some oil.
Second, mix the chopped kimchi and vegetables with rice.
Lastly, add some soybean sauce and sesame oil.
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