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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 05. 15 조회 13089

Cooking

작성자: 1102047904 담당 튜터: Beth
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
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Father-in-law came yesterday.
I have made doenjang soup in the morning.
Doenjang soup is my favorite food.
Father-in-law also liked it.

Also, it's delicious and good for my health.
I often cook it for my family on weekends and my family loves it.

I'll tell you how to make it.
To make kimchi fried rice, you don't need many ingredients.
Just prepare kimchi, onions, and carrots.

If you're a meat lover, you can add some meat.

First, fry the meat and vegetables with some oil.
Second, mix the chopped kimchi and vegetables with rice.
Lastly, add some soybean sauce and sesame oil.
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-> My father-in-law came yesterday.

->  I  have  made Doenjang soup in the morning.

->  Doenjang soup is my favorite food. My father-in-law also liked likes  it.

-> Also,  It's delicious and good for my health.

I often cook it for my family on weekends and my family loves it.

-> I'll   Let me tell you how to make it.

To make kimchi fried rice, you don't need many ingredients. Just prepare kimchi, onions, and carrots. If you're a meat lover, you can add some meat.

-> First, fry the meat and vegetables with some in oil.

Second, mix the chopped kimchi and vegetables with rice. Lastly, add some soybean sauce and sesame oil.

 

 

Hello again Peter,

You did an excellent job with your composition today. There were few errors and I liked if the most when you gave the

instructions on how to prepare Doenjang soup. I do hope that your father-in-law enjoyed his stay in your place. Preparing

his favorite soup was an awesome idea!  Keep up the good work. Have a great day ahead. I'll call on Tuesday!

 

-Beth-  ^-^

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