help, please
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I don’t know possibility to turn water into fuel so much.
But I hope that it’ll be come true somedat.
I think that one of the most natural resourceses is sun.
Scientistes are studying of turning sun into energy and that is commercial.
A month ago the picture of satellite at NASA shows how serious Korea’s air pollution is.
Yhey are saying that this is the vehicle’s exhaust gas.
This is the main cause of global warming.
The developed countries want to regulate carbon footprint but the underdeveloped countries don’t agree this suggestion.
I hope that the sustitute resource will be found or developed not to pollute our earth in the near future.
But I hope that it’ll be come true somedat.
I think that one of the most natural resourceses is sun.
Scientistes are studying of turning sun into energy and that is commercial.
A month ago the picture of satellite at NASA shows how serious Korea’s air pollution is.
Yhey are saying that this is the vehicle’s exhaust gas.
This is the main cause of global warming.
The developed countries want to regulate carbon footprint but the underdeveloped countries don’t agree this suggestion.
I hope that the sustitute resource will be found or developed not to pollute our earth in the near future.
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