help, please
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
You know I take anemia medicine one pill everyday.
These days, my health is better, I sometimes forget to take.
If we have a cold and go to the hospital, the doctors always prescribed antibiotic and then they say that we take a good rest.
But the effect of medicine are not taken.
So the Korean words are that if you have a cold and go to the hospital, you’ll recover in two weeks, but if you don't go to the hospital, you’ll recover in fourteen days.
And to conclude, whether we go to the hospital or not, the period of recoverance is the same.
But Korean people easily like to go to the hospital that they are worried about their health.
If the efficacy of a remedy does not appearance, the stronger drug is required.
The experts say that antibiotic abuse or degree of it’s resistance is serious.
These days, my health is better, I sometimes forget to take.
If we have a cold and go to the hospital, the doctors always prescribed antibiotic and then they say that we take a good rest.
But the effect of medicine are not taken.
So the Korean words are that if you have a cold and go to the hospital, you’ll recover in two weeks, but if you don't go to the hospital, you’ll recover in fourteen days.
And to conclude, whether we go to the hospital or not, the period of recoverance is the same.
But Korean people easily like to go to the hospital that they are worried about their health.
If the efficacy of a remedy does not appearance, the stronger drug is required.
The experts say that antibiotic abuse or degree of it’s resistance is serious.
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