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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 07. 17 조회 16874

Please check my sentences gramatically (7.12)

작성자: 1102047346 담당 튜터: Melanie1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
We've already made schedule that we would meet at 1:00pm, but we have to reschedule.
I make you wait for me almost for 30min.

I know there is a good bookstore in Seoul staion called Kyobo bookstore.
While reading books, the time that you wait for me will seem short.

My boss's father got lung cancer.
He got better but started worse again 3 months ago.
Now he is in critical condition.
I don't know how I can cheer him up.
I want to know how I give relief to him.
I pray god to stop him be sick.

My father used to be active when he was young.
He wants to takes a rest just lying on the sofa after work.
I want him to work out regularly for his health.
Although I suggest him to go outside with me but he rejects.
He said "I've already got old to work out. Go ahead alone. I can't go out to work out with you."

The older people get, the higher getting cancer rate.
I'm confident about my health.
Even though someone looks healthy, he or she might have awful disease.
튜터 교정 답변

We had already made plans to meet at 1pm but we have to reschedule.
I made you wait 30 minutes for me.

I know there is a good bookstore in Seoul station called Kyobo bookstore.
Since you read books while waiting for me it made the time pass quickly.

My boss's father got lung cancer.
He got better but it started to get worse 3 months later.
He was in critical condition.
I didn't know how to cheer him up.
I wanted to know I made him happy.
I prayed god to stop him from being sick.

My father used to be active when he was young.
He wants to relax after work by laying on the couch.
I want him to work out regularly to improve his health.

I suggest for him to go outside with me but he chooses not to.
He feels he is too old to work out and suggest for me to go alone.

The older people get, the higher the cancer rate increases.
I'm confident about my health.
Even though someone looks healthy, they could still have a deadly disease.

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