Introducing my family
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
There are 3 members in my family. I’m married and have one daughter whose name is Soo Yeon.
Our family’s most important thing is the education of my daughter. She has been taking 5 private lessons like English, Mathematics, drawing , Playing Piano, Taekwondo. We can’t even go anywhere all together at Saturday morning because of my daughter’s private education.
I think there is great pressure on my daughter but my wife thinks my daughter have to manage it for the happiness in the future.
Our family’s most important thing is the education of my daughter. She has been taking 5 private lessons like English, Mathematics, drawing , Playing Piano, Taekwondo. We can’t even go anywhere all together at Saturday morning because of my daughter’s private education.
I think there is great pressure on my daughter but my wife thinks my daughter have to manage it for the happiness in the future.
튜터 교정 답변
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