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수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Many countries including Korea have applied economic sanctions against North Korea.
According to broadcasting, people lives of North Korea are harder and Mr. Kim is preparing war.
North Korean defectors are increasing year by year.
Mr. Kim jong un is threatening South Korea and USA by attacking missile.
The ministry of national defense decided to establish THAAD(Terminal High Altitude Area Defense) and selected a site.
Most of Korean understand necessity of THAAD but they don’t want to establish around my area because of danger of electricmicro wave .
A few days ago, the arranging area of THAAD was selected Seongju county in North Gyeongsangdo.
Population of Seongju about twenty thousand and there is famous for melon(over 80% cultivating of our country)
Most people of Seong are demonstrating that they didn’t know why their hometown was decided and they wondered their healthy and economic damage.
According to broadcasting, people lives of North Korea are harder and Mr. Kim is preparing war.
North Korean defectors are increasing year by year.
Mr. Kim jong un is threatening South Korea and USA by attacking missile.
The ministry of national defense decided to establish THAAD(Terminal High Altitude Area Defense) and selected a site.
Most of Korean understand necessity of THAAD but they don’t want to establish around my area because of danger of electricmicro wave .
A few days ago, the arranging area of THAAD was selected Seongju county in North Gyeongsangdo.
Population of Seongju about twenty thousand and there is famous for melon(over 80% cultivating of our country)
Most people of Seong are demonstrating that they didn’t know why their hometown was decided and they wondered their healthy and economic damage.
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