Please check my sentences gramatically (7.13)
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Yesterday I checked up my body to recognize how muscle and fat in my body.
I got how I have muscle and fat.
I expect my body healthier than now.
Newspaper is good material to get new information.
My job is needed to get much information.
I have to update information everyday.
Newspaper is a good tool to discuss with someone.
When I was in college, I used to read newspaper as paper material.
If I have my son or daughter, I will train them by reading newspaper and discussing together.
Although time has run and technology have been developed, newspaper delivers still remain.
Because there are quite a few people that prefer to paper material instead of articles on PC or smartphone.
If North Korea has nuclear, there is risk that war break out.
Even though Korea and US try to north korea give up nuclear, they wouldn't back out of their terrible weapon.
In Korea, there are tons of investor from other contries.
Much money will go out from korea because of war risk.
I got how I have muscle and fat.
I expect my body healthier than now.
Newspaper is good material to get new information.
My job is needed to get much information.
I have to update information everyday.
Newspaper is a good tool to discuss with someone.
When I was in college, I used to read newspaper as paper material.
If I have my son or daughter, I will train them by reading newspaper and discussing together.
Although time has run and technology have been developed, newspaper delivers still remain.
Because there are quite a few people that prefer to paper material instead of articles on PC or smartphone.
If North Korea has nuclear, there is risk that war break out.
Even though Korea and US try to north korea give up nuclear, they wouldn't back out of their terrible weapon.
In Korea, there are tons of investor from other contries.
Much money will go out from korea because of war risk.
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