Please check my sentences gramatically (7.14)
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
If I drink soju a lot, I have to suffer from awful headache nextday.
In the past, there was only way to read newspaper using paper material.
I can approach millions of articles mort than in the past.
It is a piece of cake to read articles.
We just search internet.
Even I can listen to articles from my smartphone or PC because the technology have already made progress.
Thanks to this advancement, blind person can understand articles although they can't see anything.
Subscribing to newpaper is a traditional way to read articles.
There are some articles that makes me sad and upset about war, accidents etc.
North korea is gradually going insane.
They would be more crazy than now.
If china and us make war with each other, Korea may be involved in the war regardless of our intention.
Although they are wiser than me, they don't have solution to solve the problem about north korea.
If I were them, I try to come up with ideas with people.
In the past, there was only way to read newspaper using paper material.
I can approach millions of articles mort than in the past.
It is a piece of cake to read articles.
We just search internet.
Even I can listen to articles from my smartphone or PC because the technology have already made progress.
Thanks to this advancement, blind person can understand articles although they can't see anything.
Subscribing to newpaper is a traditional way to read articles.
There are some articles that makes me sad and upset about war, accidents etc.
North korea is gradually going insane.
They would be more crazy than now.
If china and us make war with each other, Korea may be involved in the war regardless of our intention.
Although they are wiser than me, they don't have solution to solve the problem about north korea.
If I were them, I try to come up with ideas with people.
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