My thinking about Tatoo
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Tatoo is a message or a way to express one's identity, character, thought, etc. In our society, any expressions about one's thought is enabled, and the tatoo is the same case. Through the tatoo, we can make my another image or express my thinking without talking.
However, tatoo has the negative points, too.
First of all, it is not easy to delete. If the children have the tatoo without deep considerations, it is recorded for all life. So, we should be cautious getting the tatoo in our skin.
However, tatoo has the negative points, too.
First of all, it is not easy to delete. If the children have the tatoo without deep considerations, it is recorded for all life. So, we should be cautious getting the tatoo in our skin.
튜터 교정 답변
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